Sora Matsuda [How NOT to make your profile]

[Zorua]

Name: Sora Matsuda
Age: 13
Appearance: s.bebo.com/app-image/6327718452/6327443187/PROFILE/i.idlestudios.com/img/q/u/08/03/30/SoakedBlonde.jpg
Personality: She is very kind and believes in others' good side. She is brave and strong, but, under confident. Sora is generally meek, however, she is still kind. She loves to eat apples and other types of fruit, but, also loves chocolate. Sora loves to hear about legends and ancient folklore. She loves adventures and exploring.
History: As a child, she was always so lonely. After a few years, she met and befriended a Jirachi who granted one of her most wanted wishes. That wish was to have true friends that would stay by her. She met many new people that became her friends and is now the person she is today.
Classes:
Battle Tactics
Pokemon Cooking
Exploration Class
Pokemon Technology
Music Appreciation
History of Pokemon

Dorm:
Pokemon:

[Victoria]

Rejected. Please extend the personality of your application to at least one paragraph. What makes her upset? Why does this make her upset? What does she think of other people?

As for her history, it needs to be at least two paragraphs. Extend on the detail. Also, characters are not allowed to have met legendary Pokemon in the past. Please revamp your history.

Also, you're missing something else. Please read the rules.

[azure]

Can we pin this up to show people what not to do?