Zorua
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Post by Zorua on Apr 26, 2011 16:47:48 GMT -5
Name: Sora Matsuda Age: 13 Appearance: s.bebo.com/app-image/6327718452/6327443187/PROFILE/i.idlestudios.com/img/q/u/08/03/30/SoakedBlonde.jpgPersonality: She is very kind and believes in others' good side. She is brave and strong, but, under confident. Sora is generally meek, however, she is still kind. She loves to eat apples and other types of fruit, but, also loves chocolate. Sora loves to hear about legends and ancient folklore. She loves adventures and exploring. History: As a child, she was always so lonely. After a few years, she met and befriended a Jirachi who granted one of her most wanted wishes. That wish was to have true friends that would stay by her. She met many new people that became her friends and is now the person she is today. Classes: Battle Tactics Pokemon Cooking Exploration Class Pokemon Technology Music Appreciation History of Pokemon Dorm: Pokemon:
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Post by Victoria on Apr 26, 2011 19:05:59 GMT -5
Rejected. Please extend the personality of your application to at least one paragraph. What makes her upset? Why does this make her upset? What does she think of other people?
As for her history, it needs to be at least two paragraphs. Extend on the detail. Also, characters are not allowed to have met legendary Pokemon in the past. Please revamp your history.
Also, you're missing something else. Please read the rules.
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Post by azure on Apr 30, 2011 17:22:00 GMT -5
Can we pin this up to show people what not to do?
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